After I watched Will Reading with an audience, I was struck by two significant flaws:

1. The beginning of the movie is unbearably slow

2. There there weren’t enough memorable images

The first problem was the biggest of the bears. I came up what I thought was a solution, but after executing it, I found that it just didn’t work. In fact, adding these new three minutes to the front of the film turned the movie into a confusing mess.

This sent me back to square one: how do I open the movie in a way that is both intriguing and well paced? I decided to simplify my approach and focus on tightening up shot length and adding a few new shots that would open up the first few moments of the movie. This made a big difference and with a solution finished, I was able to move on to the final bit: making the movie look a bit more cinematic.

Ultimately, this man adding three more shots and changing the composition of a few existing shots as well as other trims and minor changes. I doubt anyone but me would knows the majority of the work, but I do think the movie moves along at a much better place now.

so is this it? Is it finally done? I don’t know. I still have to cut in these last two shots and I’m not entirely sure they’re going to work, meaning I’m going to have to shoot them again. I was outside, it was windy and I was working alone. These are not great conditions to work in, but it was the best I could do at the time. I might have to call in reinforcements and start from scratch. Fortunately, it’s just two relatively straight forward shots and if I can’t cut them in successfully, reshooting them is not the end of the world.

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